自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接且结构清楚，也用“so”和“Later”说明了前后经历。可以补充一个具体细节，例如你骑车去了哪里，或当时对骑车的感受，让内容更生动；注意控制在五句话以内。

示例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, so I usually walked to school. When I was a teenager, my parents bought me one, and I learned to ride it. I was excited because I could cycle to my friends’ houses.

建议: 先直接回答“Bikes are popular in China”会比“The bike is popular”更自然。回答中有较多重复和停顿词，建议先组织好句子再说；“most students”后应使用“rode”，并将“ride back”改为“rode a bike”，“go to the class”改为“go to class”。还可以补充一个具体原因或例子，使答案更完整。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially among university students. When I was at university, many students rode bikes to class because it was convenient and inexpensive. I often rode mine to the student club as well.

× When I, when I was a university student, uh, umm, every student, most uh, students ride back to go to the class and I usually ride a bike to the club.

✓ When I was a university student, most students rode bikes to class, and I usually rode a bike to the club.

这里说的是“我上大学时”发生的事情，时间背景在过去，所以描述当时学生骑车以及自己通常骑车去俱乐部时，动词 ride 应使用过去式 rode。修改时也删去了口语中的重复和填充词；“去上课”用 go to class 更自然。