自行车— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, of course. My parents bought me a bike when I was about uh, six or seven years old and I really uh, liked using it uh, and riding it with my friends or just uh, when we were walking with my family and it was a really. Umm.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Oh interesting question. In my opinion they are quite popular in my country but not like in the others because people still use cars or public transport more. Is it more convenient and it's not that?
评估
总分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 55.0建议: Ответьте прямо, а затем добавьте один конкретный факт или воспоминание. Уберите частые заполнители пауз («uh», «umm») и не объединяйте несовместимые действия: вместо «riding it when we were walking» скажите, что вы катались с друзьями или ездили с семьёй. Завершите мысль: последнее предложение сейчас обрывается.
示例: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about six or seven, and I often rode it around the neighbourhood with my friends. I also sometimes went on bike rides with my family.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 45.0建议: Сформулируйте ясный ответ и объясните его одной конкретной причиной или примером. Избегайте неестественного сравнения «not like in the others» и завершайте предложение: фраза «Is it more convenient and it's not that?» грамматически неясна. Можно противопоставить велосипеды автомобилям и общественному транспорту, используя связку «although».
示例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are a convenient and affordable way to travel short distances. However, many people prefer cars or public transport for their daily commute.
语法
× Is it more convenient and it's not that?
✓ It is more convenient.
The answer is making a statement, but Is it more convenient uses question word order. Use It is more convenient for a statement. The ending, it's not that, is incomplete, so omit it unless you can finish the thought.
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