自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense: say “I didn’t have a bike.” Avoid fillers such as “um” and “like,” and correct phrases such as “I live in city” and “I’m not a sport lover.” The explanation is relevant, but make the reasons clearer and less repetitive; for example, explain that your family had limited space or that a bike was too expensive. Keep the answer to a few well-linked sentences.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment in the city, so we didn’t have much space to store one. Also, my parents thought it was too expensive, and I wasn’t particularly interested in cycling.

建议: Give a clear answer first, such as “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.” Use accurate, natural phrases: “sports ground” or “playground,” “cycling,” “bike-rental shop,” and “promotes a healthy lifestyle.” Your answer ends unfinished, so complete the idea about how bikes benefit people. Add one specific observation and connect it with a linking word such as “for example” or “because.”

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see children cycling near the sports ground by my home at weekends, and there’s a bike-rental shop nearby. Cycling is convenient and helps people stay active, so I think more people are choosing it as a healthy way to get around.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense. Change don't have to didn't have.

× I live in city but not in like rural areas.

✓ I lived in a city, not in a rural area.

This describes where you lived as a child, so use the past tense lived. The singular countable noun city also needs an article: a city.

× There is not enough space for me to ride a bike.

✓ There was not enough space for me to ride a bike.

Use was rather than is to describe the amount of space in the past, when you were a child.

× I think buying a bicycle is also very kind of expensive.

✓ I thought buying a bicycle was also quite expensive.

To keep the answer in the past context, change think to thought and is to was. Quite expensive is a natural way to express this idea.

× I'm also not a sport lover to ride bikes.

✓ I also wasn't a sports lover, so I didn't ride bikes.

Use wasn't and didn't ride to describe your feelings and actions during childhood. The original phrasing to ride bikes does not clearly express the relationship between being a sports lover and riding.

× I think my city evidence on healthy life a lot.

✓ I think my city promotes a healthy lifestyle a lot.

The original clause does not have a clear grammatical structure: evidence does not work as a verb with my city as its subject here. If you mean that the city encourages healthy living, use promotes a healthy lifestyle.