自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，并用过去时说明自己小时候有没有自行车。你后半句似乎想表达“和家人一起租自行车骑行”，请把这个经历说清楚；注意使用正确的过去式，如 *didn’t have*、*rented*、*rode*，并将 *me were* 改为 *I was*。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike of my own when I was a child. However, my family sometimes rented bikes, and we rode together along the roads near our home.

建议: 先明确回答自行车在台湾是否流行，再用一两个具体理由解释。你提到台湾人更常使用摩托车和汽车，可以用 *people tend to travel by...* 表达；“自行车和道路”部分意思不清楚，建议改为清楚的比较或具体例子。注意避免 *I'm currently from Taiwan* 这类不自然表达，可直接说 *In Taiwan*。

示例: I don’t think bikes are as popular as motorcycles in Taiwan. Many people prefer motorcycles because they’re convenient for getting around, especially in busy cities. However, some people still cycle for exercise or for short trips.

× I know bio when me were a child, but I rent a bike and my family together ride every road.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I rented a bike, and my family and I rode along the roads together.

这段话描述的是童年时发生的事情，应使用过去时。这里将 rent 改为 rented，将 ride 改为 rode；表示“我小时候没有自行车”时，可说 didn't have a bike。

× I know bio when me were a child, but I rent a bike and my family together ride every road.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I rented a bike, and my family and I rode along the roads together.

在从句“___ was a child”中，空缺处作主语，应使用主格代词 I，而不能使用宾格 me。

× Mmm, I think not, because I'm currently from Taiwan, but Taiwan wrote everything motorcycle and the car. Uh lost bicycle and road.

✓ Mmm, I don't think so, because I'm from Taiwan, but Taiwan has motorcycles and cars on its roads.

currently 表示“目前”，通常不用于表达来自哪里；说籍贯或来自某地，直接说 I'm from Taiwan 即可。后半句的原意不够清楚，因此这里只对能够判断的表达作了调整。