自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接说明你小时候没有自己的自行车，再解释妈妈教你骑车以及你们如何借用共享单车，避免让人误以为你从未骑过自行车。注意使用过去时，例如“my mum taught me”，并把“scan the core”改为“scan a QR code”。删去重复和填充词，最后用完整句子结束回答。

示例: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child. My mum taught me how to ride one, though. When we needed a bike, we sometimes borrowed a shared one by scanning its QR code.

建议: 用完整的直接回答开头，例如“是的，自行车在我的国家很受欢迎”。说明你观察到的现象时，要用合适的时态：描述习惯可用一般现在时（“when I go for a walk after dinner, I see…”）。“ride-by”不自然，可改为“ride around”或“cycle”，并补充一个具体原因或完整细节。

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. When I go for a walk after dinner, I often see people cycling along the road. Many of them ride with their families or friends, so cycling seems to be a popular way to relax and get around.

× When I was young, I have my mom just taught me how to ride a bike.

✓ When I was young, my mom taught me how to ride a bike.

这里说的是童年时已经发生并结束的事情，应使用一般过去时 taught。原句中的 have 与 taught 组合不正确；可直接用“主语 + taught + 宾语 + how to...”来表达“某人教某人如何做某事”。

× Like we use the phone to scan the core and we just use the bike.

✓ Like we used the phone to scan the core, and we just used the bike.

上下文描述的是小时候借用公共自行车的经历，应使用一般过去时。因此 use 应改为 used。

× When I finish my dinner I walk through the road I saw many bikes there.

✓ When I finish dinner and walk through the road, I see many bikes there.

这句话描述的是晚饭后经常看到的情况，宜使用一般现在时。原句前半部分使用 finish 和 walk，后面却用了过去式 saw，时态不一致；这里应改为 see。

× I walk through the road.

✓ I walk along the road.

表达沿着道路行走时，通常用 along the road；through 表示从某个空间或区域内部穿过，不适合这里的意思。

× Some people just a ride-by with their families or friends and smiling.

✓ Some people just ride by with their families or friends and smile.

ride by 和 smile 是由 and 连接的并列动作，形式应保持一致，都用一般现在时动词原形。smiling 与 ride by 的形式不一致；此外，ride by 在这里作动词短语使用，前面不应加 a。