自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the yes/no question directly, then add a relevant reason or brief detail. “It is costly city” is unclear and does not say whether you had a bike. Use a complete sentence and connect any extra detail with a linking word such as “because.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, especially at weekends.

建议: Give a clear opinion about how popular bikes are, then support it with a relevant example. “Harbor and beach” is only a fragment and does not answer the question. Use a complete sentence and explain where or why people ride bikes.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, people often ride them along the beach or around the harbor for exercise and sightseeing.

× It is costly city.

✓ It is a costly city.

The singular countable noun 'city' needs an article. Use 'a' before 'costly city' because it refers to one city and 'costly' begins with a consonant sound. For singular countable nouns, check whether an article such as 'a' or 'the' is needed.

× Harbor and beach.

✓ Bikes are popular at harbors and beaches.

The original is a fragment because it has no verb and does not express a complete thought. Adding the subject 'Bikes' and the verb 'are popular' makes it a complete sentence. Use plural forms here to refer generally to multiple locations.