自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “I had,” not “I have.” Avoid repeating words, and describe the bike clearly; “two training wheels” may be what you mean by “two sport wheels.” Use a natural phrase such as “ride it in the park near my home” rather than “play it with the inner park.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was very colourful and had two training wheels. I often rode it in the park near my home.

建议: Give a direct answer, but use the natural phrase “very popular” rather than “very much popular.” Make the travel detail more specific—for example, mention commuting or riding short distances—and use “an” before a word beginning with a vowel sound, as in “an adventurous sport.”

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute or to get around nearby areas, especially when the roads are busy. Others ride them for exercise or take part in adventurous cycling sports.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The answer refers to a time in the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Also, remove the repeated I was to avoid unnecessary repetition.

× It has 2 sport wheels along it.

✓ It had two support wheels on it.

Because the bike is being described as it was when you were a child, use the past-tense verb had instead of has.

× It has 2 sport wheels along it.

✓ It had two support wheels on it.

Use on it to describe wheels attached to or present on the bike. Along it is not the natural preposition in this context.

× It is very colourful like I used to play it with the inner park.

✓ It was very colourful, and I used to ride it in the park.

The description refers to the bike you had as a child, so use the past-tense was rather than is.

× It is very colourful like I used to play it with the inner park.

✓ It was very colourful, and I used to ride it in the park.

Use and to connect the two related statements. Like does not clearly express the intended relationship between them here.

× It is very colourful like I used to play it with the inner park.

✓ It was very colourful, and I used to ride it in the park.

Use in the park to describe where you rode the bike. With the park does not express location correctly in this sentence.

× I think bikes are very much popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country.

Very directly modifies the adjective popular. Very much is not used in this way before an adjective.

× Some people use a bike for a adventurous sport.

✓ Some people use a bike for an adventurous sport.

Use an before a word that begins with a vowel sound. Adventurous begins with a vowel sound, so an is required.