自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, using the past tense: “I didn’t have a bike.” Use the article “a” before “bike,” and avoid suggesting that not having a bike was because you are a girl. Give a clear, relevant reason and, if useful, add one specific detail. Avoid repeating the same point.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads near our home. I usually walked or went by car instead.

建议: Give a direct answer, then support it with a clear reason and specific examples. Use natural phrases such as “a convenient way to get around” and “for commuting,” rather than “vehicle among the boys” or “use their bikes to transportation.” Complete your thought, and avoid fillers and repetition.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. Many people ride them to work or school, especially for short trips.

× I haven't a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past period, indicated by when I was a child, so use the simple past didn't have rather than haven't.

× My family didn't allow me to use bike.

✓ My family didn't allow me to use a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike when referring to any bike.

× Therefore I haven't bike.

✓ Therefore, I didn't have a bike.

The answer is about the student's childhood, so use the simple past didn't have. The corrected sentence also needs an article before the singular countable noun bike.

× Bikes are the most convenient vehicle among the boys and the community in our country.

✓ Bikes are the most convenient vehicles among the boys and the community in our country.

The plural subject bikes calls for the plural noun vehicles in this sentence. Check that nouns agree in number with the things they refer to.

× They always use their bikes to transportation.

✓ They always use their bikes for transportation.

Use for to describe the purpose of the bikes. The phrase to transportation is not the appropriate preposition pattern here.

× Go to office.

✓ Go to the office.

In this context, office is a singular countable noun referring to a destination, so it normally takes an article. Use the office for a specific workplace.