自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，但有明显的语法和搭配问题：过去的经历应使用过去时，可说 “I didn’t have a bike”；“lack in balancing” 和 “brave to bike” 不自然，建议改为 “I wasn’t very good at balancing” 和 “I was afraid to ride one”。可以补充一个具体原因或经历，让回答更完整。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t very good at balancing. I was afraid I might fall, so I never really learned to ride one.

建议: 回答切题，但 “quite popular” 和 “quite often” 重复使用 quite；“it’s quite often to see” 以及 “bikers have a ride” 都不够自然。建议用 “bicycles are popular” 或 “cycling is popular”，并用更自然的表达描述你观察到的情况，例如在路上经常能看到人们骑车。还可以补充骑车的用途或受欢迎的原因。

示例: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country. I often see people riding their bikes on the roads, especially in the mornings. Many people use them to commute because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× I had not a bike

✓ I didn't have a bike

这里是在否定过去发生的情况。一般过去时的否定通常用“didn't + 动词原形”，所以应说“didn't have”，而不是“had not a bike”。

× I'm lack in balancing

✓ I'm not good at balancing

“lack”是实义动词，不能放在“I'm”之后直接构成这个结构。可以改用“be good at doing something”的结构，表示“擅长做某事”；否定形式“not good at balancing”表示不擅长保持平衡。

× I I'm not brave to bike

✓ I'm not brave enough to ride a bike

原句重复了主语“I”，而且“brave to bike”搭配不自然。删除重复主语，并用“brave enough to do something”表达“足够勇敢去做某事”；“ride a bike”是更合适的骑自行车表达。

× I think it's quite popular in my country

✓ I think they're quite popular in my country

这里谈论的是复数名词“bikes”，所以应使用复数代词“they”，而不是单数代词“it”。

× it's quite often to see

✓ it's quite common to see

“often”是副词，不能自然地放在“it is ... to see”这一结构中作表语。这里应使用形容词“common”，表示“常见的”。