自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense, and use “bike” consistently rather than “bag.” Explain briefly when you learned to ride and how skilled you were. Avoid restarting and filler words; say “riding skills” rather than “back skills.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me when I was quite young, and I practised riding it in our neighborhood. I wasn’t very good at it, though.

建议: Give a clear answer and explain that bike-sharing services have made cycling popular. Use “bike-sharing bikes,” “scan a QR code,” and “ride,” not “read.” Reduce repeated fillers and connect your explanation smoothly. Clarify that users can ride the bikes around the city center.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use bike-sharing services because they can scan a QR code with their phones to unlock a bike. It’s a convenient way to travel around the city center.

× Yes, I do have a had a bag when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so use the simple past had. The phrase do have a had combines incompatible verb forms. Use one past-tense verb form: I had. Bike is used in the correction to match the question about bikes.

× But I must say my mm my back skills is not good well.

✓ But I must say my bike skills were not very good.

The subject skills is plural, so it requires the plural verb were, not is. Because the speaker is describing childhood, the past-tense were is appropriate. Use the adjective good to describe skills, and very to modify good; well is not appropriate in this adjective phrase.

× So they provide a QR card so you can use your phone and scan it so you can immediately unlock it and you can read the bicycles to anywhere in the city's center.

✓ So they provide a QR code that you can scan with your phone to unlock a bike and ride it anywhere in the city center.

Do not use to before anywhere; anywhere can directly indicate the destination or location. City center is the natural phrase here, without the possessive apostrophe. A QR code is what is scanned, and ride is the appropriate verb for using a bicycle.