自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Trả lời trực tiếp và dùng đúng thì quá khứ: “Yes, I did. I had a bike…”. Câu trả lời hiện có nhiều cụm khó hiểu và bị ngắt giữa chừng, chẳng hạn “used it to have a bike” và “after the spoon times”. Hãy diễn đạt một lý do rõ ràng, thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về nơi bạn đi hoặc việc bạn làm với chiếc xe, rồi kết thúc câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I rode it around my neighbourhood. It was a fun way to visit my friends after school.

建议: Nêu ý kiến rõ ràng ngay đầu câu và sửa cách dùng danh từ số nhiều: “bikes” hoặc “bicycles”. Tránh lặp “because”; thay “motor circle” bằng “motorbikes”, đồng thời so sánh phương tiện theo một tiêu chí cụ thể, chẳng hạn quãng đường hoặc sự tiện lợi. Hãy dùng câu ngắn, hoàn chỉnh và kết thúc bằng một nhận xét rõ ràng.

示例: I don't think bicycles are as popular as motorbikes in my country. Many people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for long journeys. However, bicycles are still common for short trips and exercise.

× When I was a child, I used it to have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike.

The expression used to describes a past habit or state. Used it to have does not fit here because it makes it sound as though it refers to using something for the purpose of having a bike.

× I always prefer to explore new places.

✓ I always preferred to explore new places.

The answer describes the student’s childhood, so the past-tense verb preferred is more consistent with the time frame than prefer.

× I can visit my friends and hang out with them.

✓ I could visit my friends and hang out with them.

Could is appropriate for describing what the student was able to do in the past. Can usually refers to present ability.

× I don't really think bike is more popular in my country.

✓ I don't really think bikes are more popular in my country.

Bike is a singular countable noun used here to refer to bikes in general. Use the plural form bikes for a general statement.

× The car or the motor circle is more convenient.

✓ Cars or motorcycles are more convenient.

The sentence makes a general comparison between types of transportation, so use the plural nouns cars and motorcycles. The plural subject also takes are.

× In the long trip, it's kind of safe term and have a good experience than a bicycle.

✓ For long trips, they are somewhat safer and offer a better experience than bicycles.

The comparison requires comparative forms: safer and better. Use than to introduce the item being compared. They refers to cars or motorcycles, so the verbs are and offer agree with that plural subject.