自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi diễn đạt rõ rằng bạn và hai anh chị em đều có xe đạp riêng. Câu trả lời hiện có nhiều từ đệm và phần tự sửa khiến ý khó hiểu; hãy dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán (ví dụ: “provided”) và chọn cách diễn đạt tự nhiên như “reliable bikes”.

示例: Yes, I did. My two siblings and I each had our own bike when we were children. My parents bought us reliable bikes, and I remember riding mine around the neighbourhood.

建议: Ý kiến và lý do đã rõ, nhưng cần dùng danh từ và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn: nói “bicycles are not a popular form of transport”, dùng “people travel” thay cho “people who's travel”, và dùng số nhiều “cars”. Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để phát triển câu trả lời.

示例: Not particularly. In Vietnam, bicycles aren’t a very popular form of transport because most people travel by motorbike, especially for commuting. Cars are also becoming more common in larger cities.

× I would still remember that uh, everyone, not everyone's, me and my siblings, me and my two siblings or half our own bikes and my parents also prepare us with a very like functions, functional bikes for us.

✓ I still remember that my two siblings and I each had our own bikes, and my parents also prepared functional bikes for us.

Use the present simple, I still remember, for a memory that remains true now. Would still remember does not fit this meaning.

× me and my two siblings

✓ my two siblings and I

Use the subject pronoun I in a compound subject. My two siblings and I is the standard form; me is an object pronoun.

× me and my two siblings or half our own bikes

✓ My two siblings and I each had our own bikes.

The question asks about childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense. Use had to describe owning the bikes at that time.

× my parents also prepare us with a very like functions, functional bikes for us

✓ My parents also prepared functional bikes for us.

The answer describes what the parents did when the student was a child, so prepare should be changed to the past-tense form prepared.

× a very like functions, functional bikes

✓ very functional bikes

Bikes is plural, so it cannot be used with the singular article a. Remove a when referring to multiple bikes.

× a very like functions, functional bikes

✓ very functional bikes

The singular article a cannot modify the plural noun bikes. Remove the article; very functional bikes is grammatically correct.

× bike is not a really umm, popular transportation in my country, Vietnam

✓ Bikes are not really a popular form of transportation in my country, Vietnam.

Transportation is uncountable in this meaning, so it should not be preceded directly by a. The phrase a popular form of transportation uses the article correctly with the singular countable noun form.

× a lot of people who's travel by motorbikes and car

✓ a lot of people who travel by motorbikes and cars

Use who to refer to people. Who's means who is or who has, and neither meaning fits before the verb travel.

× motorbikes and car

✓ motorbikes and cars

The speaker is referring to vehicles generally, so both items in the plural list should be plural: motorbikes and cars.