自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答自己小时候有没有自行车，再补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、骑车去哪里或和谁一起骑。注意使用过去时：用“had”而不是“have”，用“rode”而不是“write”；“write”是“写”，这里应为“ride/rode”。避免重复和填充词，并注意“my friend’s house”的所有格表达。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a white bike when I was a child, and I often rode it to my friend’s house after school. We used to ride around the neighborhood together.

建议: 开头直接回答“自行车很受欢迎”，然后用共享单车作为具体例子，并说明它受欢迎的原因。注意说“shared bikes are everywhere”，而不是“we have the shared bike everywhere”；“扫码骑车”可表达为“scan a QR code to unlock a bike”，“ride it anywhere”表示骑去任何地方。删去重复的“it’s convenient”，并使用连接词让说明更连贯。

示例: Yes, definitely. Shared bikes are very popular in China, especially in big cities. For a short trip, people can scan a QR code on their phones to unlock one, which is convenient and affordable.

× I mean every child has their own bike in their childhood.

✓ I mean, every child had their own bike when they were young.

这句话谈论的是童年时期的情况，应使用过去时 had，而不是一般现在时 has。用 when they were young 表达“在他们年幼时”也更自然。

× And I have a write one.

✓ And I had a white one.

这里是在回答小时候是否有自行车，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。根据上下文，write 应是指颜色 white；这处属于词语辨认问题，不是语法问题。

× And I always write write it to my friends home.

✓ And I always rode it to my friends' home.

这里描述小时候经常骑车的习惯，应使用 ride 的过去式 rode。friends' 表示“朋友们的”，需要在复数 friends 后加撇号表示所有格。

× In China we have the shared bike everywhere.

✓ In China, we have shared bikes everywhere.

这里泛指中国各地都有共享单车，不是指某一辆单车，因此应使用复数 shared bikes。

× In China we have the shared bike everywhere.

✓ In China, we have shared bikes everywhere.

此处是在泛指共享单车，不需要定冠词 the。去掉 the，并用复数形式表达一般类别。

× And if you have a short trip, then you can use your phone and scan it and write it to everywhere.

✓ And if you have a short trip, you can use your phone to scan it and ride it everywhere.

everywhere 本身表示“到处”，前面通常不加介词 to，因此应说 ride it everywhere。根据上下文，write 应为 ride；这处属于词语辨认问题，不是语法问题。