自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，但内容过于简短。可以补充一个具体细节，例如小时候是否经常骑车、在哪里骑，或骑车给你留下了什么印象；控制在两三句话内。

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around the park near my home.

建议: 表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点，但后半句不够自然。应说“most people”，而不是“most of people”；“take variety activities by bike”可改为“use bikes for commuting and leisure activities”。建议补充一个具体原因或例子，并用连接词组织信息。

示例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people use them to commute or go shopping, especially in busy cities.

× Yeah, most of people can take variety activities by bike.

✓ Yeah, most people can do a variety of activities by bike.

泛指“大多数人”时，most 后面直接接名词，不用 most of people。most of 后面通常需要限定词，例如 most of the people。建议表达为 most people。

× Yeah, most of people can take variety activities by bike.

✓ Yeah, most people can do a variety of activities by bike.

variety 是单数可数名词，此处表示“各种各样的活动”，应使用 a，并采用 a variety of activities 的结构。建议记住表达 a variety of + 复数名词。

× Yeah, most of people can take variety activities by bike.

✓ Yeah, most people can do a variety of activities by bike.

表示“各种各样的活动”时，variety 后需要介词 of，构成 a variety of activities。原句缺少 of。