自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，也给出了没有学骑车的原因，结构清楚。注意“fall off from the bike”不自然，建议说“fall off a bike”；“'cause, you know”略显随意且有些冗余，可以改为“because”。还可以补充一个具体细节，例如你是否因此错过了和朋友骑车的机会。控制在两到三句即可。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I was afraid of falling off. I never learned to ride one, although I sometimes wished I could cycle around with my friends.

建议: 回答立场明确，也用上海、北京作为例子，内容切题。需要修正语法：“sharing bike”应为“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”，“every cities”应为“every city”或“many cities”。“Definitely yes”可以换成更自然的“Definitely”。建议再补充一个具体原因，例如共享单车方便短途出行，并减少“Umm”等填充词。

示例: Definitely. Bikes, especially shared bikes, are popular in China, particularly in major cities like Shanghai and Beijing. They’re convenient for short trips and make it easy to get around without driving.

× I was very afraid of falling off from the bike.

✓ I was very afraid of falling off the bike.

表示“从自行车上摔下来”时，fall off 后面直接接名词，不需要再加 from。可以说 fall off the bike 或 fall off a bike。

× In China there are more and more kinds of sharing bike in every cities, especially in those metropolitan cities like Shanghai, Beijing.

✓ In China, there are more and more kinds of shared bikes in every city, especially in metropolitan cities like Shanghai and Beijing.

bike 是可数名词。more and more kinds of 后面指多种共享单车，应使用复数 shared bikes；every 后面必须接单数名词，因此 every cities 应改为 every city。