自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly with a clear yes or no, then briefly explain whether you rode or owned a bike. The phrases “in that impact” and “I don't aware” are unclear, and repeated words make the answer difficult to follow. Use a simple past-tense sentence such as “I didn’t have one” and add one specific reason or memory.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I never learned to ride one, so I usually walked or took the bus. I don’t ride a bike nowadays either.

建议: Start with a complete answer, such as “Yes, they’re quite popular,” and then give a clear reason or example. “In prison” and “dream bike delaying this bike” do not communicate your intended meaning, and the final sentence is unfinished. Avoid broad claims about “everyone”; instead, describe who uses bikes or where you see them.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them to get to school or work because they’re affordable and convenient in traffic. You can also see groups of cyclists riding for exercise at weekends.

× Are definitely not when I was a child

✓ I definitely did not have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about having a bike in the past, so use the past auxiliary did not followed by the base verb have. The original also lacks a clear subject and complete verb phrase. For a direct answer, say I definitely did not have a bike.

× I never used a bike in that impact at at the age of at present

✓ I never used a bike at that age.

Use at with age when referring to a particular point in someone’s life, as in at that age. In that impact is not an appropriate prepositional phrase here. Remove the repeated and conflicting phrases.

× At present, I don't, uh, aware or I don't use a bike because I hey, don't drive it.

✓ At present, I don't use a bike because I don't know how to ride one.

In the original, don't cannot directly precede the adjective aware. An adjective needs a form of be, as in I am not aware. The sentence also restarts with I don't use a bike, so use that complete clause and avoid the unfinished alternative. The corrected version keeps the clear point that you do not use a bike.

× That's why, and also I don't I don't have.

✓ That is why I do not have one either.

The original joins an incomplete phrase to a repeated, unfinished clause. Complete the thought by stating what you do not have. One refers back to a bike, avoiding unnecessary repetition.

× Well, in my country by has been more popular in prison,

✓ Well, in my country, bikes have been more popular recently.

When the subject is plural bikes, use the plural verb have, not has. The words by and in prison do not form a clear grammatical phrase in this context, so the correction uses a simple time expression to make the sentence complete and natural.

× So I think it's very.

✓ So I think they are very popular.

The original ends before completing the thought: very needs an adjective or other complement, and it is unclear what it refers to. Since the answer is discussing bikes, name them as the subject and complete the idea with popular.