自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用正确的时态和句型：说童年经历时用过去时，例如“when I was a child”和“I liked riding”；表达感受时可说“It made me feel happy”。还可以补充骑车的地点或用途，让回答更具体。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood after school, and it always made me feel happy.

建议: 先清楚回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用完整句子说明原因。避免重复“I live in this city”，并把“it's no motorcycle”改成准确表达，例如“there aren't many motorbikes”。注意句子不要中断；可以说明人们在什么情况下骑车，例如上下班或短途出行，并用“because”连接理由。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my city. There aren't many motorbikes, so people often ride bicycles to work or when they go home. They are also a convenient way to get around for short trips.

× When I was child

✓ When I was a child

child是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词。这里应在child前加不定冠词a。

× because I like riding

✓ because I liked riding

这句话是在回忆小时候的经历，因此描述当时喜欢骑车时，宜使用过去式liked。

× It feels so happy.

✓ I felt so happy.

happy描述人的感受，不能自然地用来描述自行车或骑车这件事。应使用I作为感受者；由于是在回忆过去，动词也应使用过去式felt。

× I live this city

✓ I live in this city

表示居住在某个城市时，live后需要加介词in，再接城市名称或this city。

× it's no motorcycle

✓ there are no motorcycles

表示某处“没有……”时，应使用there be句型，不能用it is来表达存在。此处可说there are no motorcycles。

× it's no motorcycle

✓ there are no motorcycles

这里是在泛指当地没有摩托车，motorcycle应使用复数motorcycles，并与there are搭配。

× People always ride bikes when they. Don't work or go home.

✓ People always ride bikes when they don't work or go home.

when引导的时间从句不能在they后被句号拆开；“Don't work or go home”因此成为不完整的句子。应将从句连接起来，并将don't小写。