自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提到了自行车是父亲送的，内容基础完整。注意过去时态：讲童年经历时应使用“had”，而不是“have”；“I too have”不自然，可改为“I also had”。第二句可用“because”连接，避免句子过于零散。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad gave it to me as a birthday present, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

建议: 表达了交通拥堵这一合理原因，但句子结构不完整，且“playing bikes”不是正确搭配。可以说“ride bikes”或“cycle”，通勤的人可说“commuters”；“it takes few times than”应改为“it takes less time than”。建议先直接回答问题，再用连接词说明骑车为何受欢迎，并补充具体场景。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Because traffic congestion is common, many commuters and university students cycle to work or school. It can be quicker than travelling by car during rush hour.

× Yeah, I too have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I also had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的经历，应使用一般过去时。这里的 have 应改为 had。

× And it's a gift from my dad.

✓ And it was a gift from my dad.

句子谈论的是小时候收到的礼物，时间背景是过去，因此应将 is 的缩写 it's 改为 was。

× Yes, in my country because of traffic congestion so most people like playing bikes to workers or university so it takes few times than umm.

✓ Yes. In my country, because of traffic congestion, most people like riding bikes to work or university because it takes less time.

原句把 because 和 so 连用，造成句子结构混乱；可以用 because 引出原因，并删去 so。结尾的比较没有说完，修改后用 because it takes less time 补全句意。

× Yes, in my country because of traffic congestion so most people like playing bikes to workers or university so it takes few times than umm.

✓ Yes. In my country, because of traffic congestion, most people like riding bikes to work or university because it takes less time.

表示骑车去上班或上大学时，work 和 university 在这里表示目的地或活动，不应使用 workers。应说 ride bikes to work or university。

× Yes, in my country because of traffic congestion so most people like playing bikes to workers or university so it takes few times than umm.

✓ Yes. In my country, because of traffic congestion, most people like riding bikes to work or university because it takes less time.

time 表示“时间”时通常是不可数名词，不能用 few 修饰；比较耗时多少时可用 less time。若要表达“次数”，才使用 times。