自行车— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I had it back when I was a child. The back was sent by my mother and she taught me how to use it and it was so convenient for me to go to work or study and hang out with my friend.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, I think bags are popular in my country. Uh, it is a convenient and green type for go out. For going out and in in of public areas there are many shared bags.
评估
总分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 48.0建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充是谁送的以及它带来的便利。“back when I was a child”与前面的“when you were a child”重复；“The back was sent”应改成“The bike was given to me”，而且小孩子通常是骑车去上学或和朋友玩，不是去工作。注意使用“ride a bike”和复数“friends”等自然表达。
示例: Yes, I did. My mother gave me a bike when I was about eight and taught me how to ride it. I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 28.0建议: 回答时要围绕题目中的“bikes”，不要误说成“bags”；这会让答案偏离问题。可以说明自行车为什么受欢迎，并用共享单车作为具体例子。将“a convenient and green type for go out”改为“a convenient and environmentally friendly way to get around”，同时删去重复且不通顺的“going out and in in of public areas”。
示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. They’re a convenient and environmentally friendly way to get around. There are also plenty of shared bikes near public places and subway stations.
语法
× Uh, it is a convenient and green type for go out.
✓ Uh, it is a convenient and green type for going out.
介词“for”后面接动词时，动词通常使用-ing形式。因此应将“go”改为“going”。也可以改用不定式表达目的：“a convenient and green way to go out”。
× For going out and in in of public areas there are many shared bags.
✓ For going in and out of public areas, there are many shared bags.
“in in of”中的介词重复且搭配错误。表示“进出某个地方”时，可以使用“go in and out of + 地点”。因此应改为“going in and out of public areas”。
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