自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，并注意讲童年经历时使用一般过去时：用“didn’t have”和“played”，而不是“don’t have”和“play”。“play myself”表达不自然，可改为“played on my own”；“we just like play”应改为“we liked playing”。删去重复的“in our”，并补充一个具体原因或例子即可，避免重复罗列活动。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually played football or basketball with my friends at a nearby court. I enjoyed playing sports, so I didn’t really miss having a bike.

建议: 开头直接表达观点，并注意名词单复数：“bikes are popular”比“bike is popular”自然。删去重复的“in our country, in our society”和口头填充词；“mining bikes”不清楚，可直接说街上有很多自行车。介绍共享单车时使用“shared bikes”，并将“buy scan”改为“by scanning”；可以补充其方便的原因。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. You can see many people riding them on the streets, and shared bikes are widely available. People can unlock one by scanning a QR code and paying a small fee, which is convenient for short trips.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，时间明确发生在过去，因此要用一般过去时。将一般现在时“don't have”改为一般过去时“didn't have”。

× I just play myself and play with my friend when I was young.

✓ I just played by myself and played with my friend when I was young.

“when I was young”表明动作发生在过去，因此两个“play”都应改为过去式“played”。

× I just play myself.

✓ I just played by myself.

表示“独自玩”时，英语使用固定搭配“by myself”，不能说“play myself”。

× We just like play football, play basketball in the court.

✓ We just liked playing football and basketball on the court.

这里描述的是小时候的喜好，应将“like”改为过去式“liked”。

× We just like play football, play basketball in the court.

✓ We just liked playing football and basketball on the court.

动词“like”后面可以接动名词，因此应说“like playing”，不能直接说“like play”。

× I think bike is very popular in our country.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in our country.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，通常使用复数“bikes”，并与复数动词“are”搭配。

× We have the sharing bike.

✓ We have shared bikes.

这里泛指共享单车，应用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。“shared”可作形容词，表示“共享的”。

× We have the sharing bike.

✓ We have shared bikes.

句子泛指共享单车，并非特指某一辆已知的单车，因此不应使用定冠词“the”。

× Everyone can take the bike, buy scan the QR code and pay some money.

✓ Everyone can take a bike by scanning the QR code and paying some money.

表示“通过扫描二维码并付费”时，介词“by”后要接动名词，所以应使用“scanning”和“paying”。