自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly and describe the bike using clear, relevant details. The model or brand name is difficult to understand, so omit it unless you can say it clearly. Use a linking word such as “and” or “because,” and avoid joining separate ideas in a run-on sentence.

示例: Yes, I had a red bicycle when I was a child. It was quite fast, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: Give a clear opinion about how popular bikes are in your country, even if you are not personally interested in them. Support your answer with a simple observation or reason. Avoid the unclear final phrase, and correct “I'm don't have” to “I don't have.”

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They are an affordable way to travel short distances, although I don't know much about them personally.

× I'm not fond of bikes, so I'm don't have any knowledge about it.

✓ I'm not fond of bikes, so I don't have any knowledge about them.

The auxiliary verb I'm cannot be used with don't. Use don't directly before the base verb have to form the negative present simple: I don't have. Because bikes is plural, them is the appropriate pronoun; it refers to a singular noun.

× I'm not fond of bikes, so I'm don't have any knowledge about it.

✓ I'm not fond of bikes, so I don't have any knowledge about them.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers here to bikes, which is plural. Use them to match the plural noun. Check that a pronoun agrees in number with the noun it refers to.

× It was very fast it was of Hercules bread.

✓ It was very fast, and it was a Hercules brand.

The original joins two independent clauses without punctuation or a conjunction, creating a run-on sentence. Join them with and, or separate them into two sentences. The corrected version also uses a before the singular count noun brand. If you meant the bicycle's manufacturer, a more natural phrasing is It was made by Hercules.