自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，也给出了原因，但有两处明显的时态/语法错误：“I were”应改为“I was”，“I like”应改为“I liked”。此外，“when I were a child”和“when I was a kid”意思重复，可以删去其中一个，让回答更简洁自然。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I preferred running and jumping, so I never really felt the need for one.

建议: 回答立场清楚，并用通勤观察和共享单车补充了细节。可以把“obviously”换成更自然的“quite”或“very”，因为“obviously”在这里略显生硬；“people are willing to use”也不够地道，可改为“many people use”。建议用“for example”连接具体例子，并说明共享单车为何受欢迎。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I see plenty of them on the roads during my daily commute, and many people use shared bikes because they’re convenient for short trips.

× I didn't have a bike when I were a child

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child

主语“I”是第一人称单数，be动词的过去式应使用“was”，不能使用“were”。建议记住过去式 be 动词的搭配：I/he/she/it 用 was，you/we/they 用 were。

× when I was a kid I like running and jumping instead of riding a bike

✓ when I was a kid I liked running and jumping instead of riding a bike

这里描述的是“小时候”的习惯或喜好，时间背景是过去，因此应将一般现在时“like”改为一般过去时“liked”。建议根据句中的过去时间背景统一使用过去时。