自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了礼物来源和骑车频率等具体细节。注意使用过去时：讲童年经历时，love 应改为 loved；“wrote a bike”应为“rode a bike”。可以把相近信息连起来，让表达更自然、简洁。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. My mom gave it to me as a birthday present, and I loved it. I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon.

建议: 先直接说明现在自行车是否流行，再解释原因或补充过去与现在的对比。“back to 2000 years”表达不清楚；如果想说过去，可以用“in the past”。注意主谓一致和时态：“he always ride”应改为“he always rode”。建议说明人们现在更多开车的具体原因或场景。

示例: Bikes aren’t as popular as they used to be in my country. When my grandpa was young, he often rode his bike to school. These days, more people drive because it’s more convenient, especially for longer journeys.

× Not really but back to 2000 years bikes are really popular.

✓ Not really, but back in 2000, bikes were really popular.

表示“在2000年”时应使用介词“in”，不能说“back to 2000 years”。可以说“back in 2000”（回到/在2000年）或“2000 years ago”（两千年前），具体选择取决于你想表达的时间。

× Not really but back to 2000 years bikes are really popular.

✓ Not really, but back in 2000, bikes were really popular.

“back in 2000”指过去的时间，因此描述当时自行车很流行时，应将现在时“are”改为过去时“were”。

× My grandpa owned one and he always ride me to school at that time but now people drive.

✓ My grandpa owned one and he always rode me to school at that time, but now people drive.

“at that time”表示过去，因此应使用“ride”的过去式“rode”。注意，“ride”的过去式是不规则变化：ride → rode → ridden。