自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Сначала ответьте прямо: «У меня не было велосипеда». Выражение “when I was as cute” здесь не подходит — скажите “when I was a child”. Используйте правильный артикль “a scooter”, избегайте повторов и слов-паразитов. Добавьте одну конкретную деталь о том, где вы катались или как проводили время с сестрой.

示例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I did have a scooter. I often rode it with my little sister in the park near our home.

建议: Дайте ясный ответ на вопрос и поясните его одной конкретной причиной или примером. Слова “violent” и “liable” не передают понятную мысль в данном контексте; выберите точные слова, например “convenient”, “affordable” или “common”. Не начинайте несколько предложений с “however” и завершайте ответ полностью.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re an affordable way to get around, and many people use them for short trips or to commute to work.

× when I was, uh, as cute

✓ when I was, uh, a child

The phrase as cute is incomplete here because as...as comparisons need a second as-phrase, and it does not fit the intended meaning. Use a child to refer to the time when you were young.

× I didn't have any bike

✓ I didn't have any bikes

Any is commonly used with plural countable nouns in negative sentences. Use bikes rather than the singular bike here.

× I had an scooter

✓ I had a scooter

Use a before a word that begins with a consonant sound. Scooter begins with the consonant sound /s/, so an is incorrect.

× all people driving it only somewhere

✓ All people drive them only in certain places.

Driving is a participle and cannot serve as the only verb in this present-tense statement. Use the simple present verb drive. Bikes is plural, so them is a more suitable pronoun than it.