自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense: “I didn’t have a bike.” Avoid repeating the same point in the final sentence. Explain your parents’ reasons in a clear, natural way, using a linking phrase such as “because” or “also.”

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried about my safety, and they also wanted to save money. I sometimes wished I had one, though.

建议: Give a clear answer first, then explain one or two specific reasons. The current explanation is difficult to understand, so use simple phrases such as “heavy traffic,” “an affordable way to travel,” and “save time.” Complete your final idea rather than ending with “reach your.”

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They are convenient because riders can get through heavy traffic more easily than cars. They are also an affordable way to travel short distances.

× No, I have not bike when I I was in, in childhood, uh, because of my parents thinking about my safety and also about the saving money. So I did not have a bike whenever I was a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety and wanted to save money.

The question asks about the past, so use the simple past did not have rather than the present perfect have not. Use was and wanted for the parents’ past concerns and wishes.

× No, I have not bike when I I was in, in childhood, uh, because of my parents thinking about my safety and also about the saving money. So I did not have a bike whenever I was a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety and wanted to save money.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article: a bike. In this context, do not use the before the general activity of saving money.

× No, I have not bike when I I was in, in childhood, uh, because of my parents thinking about my safety and also about the saving money. So I did not have a bike whenever I was a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike during my childhood because my parents were concerned about my safety and wanted to save money.

Use during my childhood or when I was a child, not in childhood in this sentence. Choose one of these expressions rather than combining them.

× So I did not have a bike whenever I was a child.

✓ So I did not have a bike when I was a child.

When refers to the period of childhood in this sentence. Whenever usually means every time that something happens, which does not fit the intended meaning.

× Yes, in my opinion bikes are popular in my country because of in the traffic issue and the some transport based on the transport and also is know about bikes are safe your time to reach your.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes are popular in my country because of traffic issues and because they can save time when traveling.

Because of should be followed directly by a noun phrase. Do not add in after it; say because of traffic issues.

× Yes, in my opinion bikes are popular in my country because of in the traffic issue and the some transport based on the transport and also is know about bikes are safe your time to reach your.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes are popular in my country because they are a convenient form of transport and can save time when traveling.

Do not use the before some. The determiner the and the quantifier some cannot be combined in this phrase. Use some transport or, as in the correction, a convenient form of transport.

× Yes, in my opinion bikes are popular in my country because of in the traffic issue and the some transport based on the transport and also is know about bikes are safe your time to reach your.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes are popular in my country because of traffic issues and because they can save time when traveling.

The original answer contains an incomplete and disorganized final clause: is know about bikes are safe your time to reach your. A complete clause needs a clear subject and verb. Use they can save time to express the likely intended meaning.