自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接、清楚地回答是否有自行车。注意区分“bike”和“bag”，并使用过去时，例如“I didn’t have”。后半部分有较多停顿和难以理解的内容，建议删去不确定的片段，再补充一个具体原因或相关细节。回答控制在一至两句即可。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t have one, so I usually walked to school.

建议: 你表达了“自行车不如摩托车普及”的主要观点，但重复了“motorbike”，也有较多填充词。建议开头直接回答，并用一个连接词说明对比，再补充具体原因或使用场景。注意使用复数表达泛指，如“Bikes are”。

示例: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country; motorbikes are much more common. They’re convenient for commuting, especially in busy cities.

× I don't have a bag when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bag when I was a child.

“when I was a child”指过去的时间，因此主句也应使用一般过去时。否定句应使用“didn't + 动词原形”，所以将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。

× The motorbike is a motor motorbike is more popular.

✓ The motorbike is more popular.

原句中“The motorbike is a motor”是未完成且与后半句重复的表达，导致句子结构混乱。建议删除这个中断的部分，保留完整意思：“The motorbike is more popular.”