自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, but it is too brief to develop the conversation. Add one or two relevant details, such as what kind of bike you had or where you rode it.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建议: You give a direct answer, but the supporting details are difficult to understand because of repeated words and inaccurate phrases such as “played the bike” and “they were get in in the jails.” Use “ride a bike,” and explain clearly why bikes are popular. If you mention accidents, say that cyclists may be injured or taken to hospital. Avoid unrelated details and use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. When I was younger, most of my friends rode their bikes on the roads near our homes. However, cycling can be dangerous in busy areas because cyclists may have accidents.

× Yeah, it's quite popular.

✓ Yeah, they're quite popular.

The subject refers to bikes, which is plural, so use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are. Match the pronoun and verb to the plural noun in the question.

× And when someone hit the road like car crash, they were get in in the jails, like they're in the hospital.

✓ And when someone gets into a car crash, they are taken to the hospital.

The intended meaning is that someone is taken to the hospital after a crash. In the passive construction, use a form of be followed by the past participle: are taken. For a general situation, use the present tense gets and are. Use this pattern: when someone gets into an accident, they are taken to the hospital.