自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, but replace “drive” with “ride” when talking about a bike. The phrase “where I was” is unclear; say “wherever I wanted” or give a specific example of where you rode. You could also use a contraction to sound more natural.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. It gave me the freedom to explore my neighborhood and visit my friends.

建议: Make the subject and verb agree by saying “bikes are popular.” Clarify that you mean “coastal cities,” and use the natural structure “cities that are located on the coast.” Add a specific reason or example to develop your answer.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Turkey, especially in coastal cities. The weather is often pleasant there, so people can use bikes for short trips or to ride along the seaside.

× Yeah, I think it's popular, but maybe not in all of the cities in Turkey, mostly cities where are located in Seaside.

✓ Yeah, I think they are popular, but maybe not in all the cities in Turkey, mostly in cities that are located by the seaside.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they are to agree with bikes. In this context, say the seaside rather than Seaside unless you mean a specific place with that name.

× Yeah, I think it's popular, but maybe not in all of the cities in Turkey, mostly cities where are located in Seaside.

✓ Yeah, I think they are popular, but maybe not in all the cities in Turkey, mostly in cities that are located by the seaside.

The relative clause where are located is not correctly formed: where cannot serve as the subject of are located. Use that are located, where that is the subject of the passive verb phrase. Also, add in before mostly in cities to make the sentence structure clear.