自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответьте прямо и сформулируйте полное предложение: «No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child». Чтобы развить ответ, добавьте конкретную причину или короткую деталь, например, где вы обычно играли. Избегайте фрагментов вроде «my childhood, no bike».

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually played football with my friends instead.

建议: Сначала дайте ясный ответ на вопрос, например: «No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country». Затем объясните причину, используя грамматически полные предложения и связку «because» или «for example». Уберите слова-паразиты и завершите мысль: сейчас фраза обрывается на «I don’t like».

示例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer to travel by car because it’s more convenient, especially for longer journeys.

× No, my childhood, no bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood.

The original answer is a fragment and has no main verb. Use the past-tense verb phrase didn't have to answer the question about your childhood. A complete answer could be: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

× No, uh, mm-hmm country are my country popular uh car.

✓ No, cars are more popular than bikes in my country.

The original words are not arranged into a clear, complete sentence. Put the subject cars before the verb are, then add the comparison and location. This also makes the answer directly address whether bikes are popular.

× My mom, uh, drive the car.

✓ My mom drives a car.

In the simple present, a third-person singular subject such as my mom requires a verb ending in -s or -es. Use drives, not drive. The article a is appropriate when referring to a car in general.