自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充学习骑车的年龄和个人看法。注意使用过去时：童年经历应说“had”，并说“when I was five”或“at the age of five”；“学会骑车”应表达为“learned to ride a bike”。“a necessary skill in my life”不够自然，可改为“a useful skill”。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was five, and I used it to get around my neighborhood. I think riding a bike is a useful skill.

建议: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一两个具体理由或例子展开，例如通勤、锻炼或共享单车。避免使用不自然的“in recently”和“easily can see”；可以说“Recently, ... have also become common”。如果想比较自行车和摩托车，请清楚说明两者的关系。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them for short trips or exercise. Recently, electric bikes have also become common because they are convenient.

× Of course I have a by in my child and I learned it on my five years, so yeah, and I think it is necessary skill in my life.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned it when I was five, so yeah, and I think it is a necessary skill in my life.

问题是在回忆童年经历，应该使用过去时。原句的“have”应改为“had”，与问题中的过去时间“when you were a child”保持一致。

× Of course I have a by in my child and I learned it on my five years, so yeah, and I think it is necessary skill in my life.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned it when I was five, so yeah, and I think it is a necessary skill in my life.

“in my child”和“on my five years”中的介词使用不当。表达“我小时候”可说“when I was a child”；表达“我五岁时”可说“when I was five”。

× Of course I have a by in my child and I learned it on my five years, so yeah, and I think it is necessary skill in my life.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned it when I was five, so yeah, and I think it is a necessary skill in my life.

“skill”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应在“necessary skill”前加不定冠词“a”，说成“a necessary skill”。

× Mmm, sure, but in recently sometimes Modicou Py also easily can see.

✓ Mmm, sure, but recently, sometimes, Modicou Py can also be seen easily.

“recently”表示“最近”，本身是副词，前面不需要介词“in”。直接说“recently”即可。

× Mmm, sure, but in recently sometimes Modicou Py also easily can see.

✓ Mmm, sure, but recently, sometimes, Modicou Py can also be seen easily.

原句中“Modicou Py”是被看到的对象，不是执行“看”这一动作的人，因此这里应使用被动语态。“can see”应改为“can be seen”。

× Mmm, sure, but in recently sometimes Modicou Py also easily can see.

✓ Mmm, sure, but recently, sometimes, Modicou Py can also be seen easily.

情态动词“can”后通常接“also”，因此说“can also be seen”。“easily”放在被动结构之后较自然，形成“can also be seen easily”。