自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，并使用过去时描述童年经历。注意几个表达：用“had a bike”而不是“have a buy”；用“rode”而不是“ride”；“骑车去学校”应说“rode my bike to school”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车上学的频率或感受。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it to school, and I enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

建议: 回答切题，也给出了共享单车方便这一理由。建议去掉口语填充语“you know”，并用复数“bikes”或“shared bikes”泛指自行车。可以进一步说明它方便在哪里，例如适合短途出行或有助于避开交通拥堵。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. They’re convenient for short trips, and people can use them to avoid traffic jams.

× Yes I have a buy when I was a child I usually ride by to my school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I usually rode my bike to school.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，时间在过去，因此 have 应改为 had，ride 应改为 rode。注意，buy 应为 bike；这里按语境将其更正为 bike。

× Yes I have a buy when I was a child I usually ride by to my school.

✓ I usually rode my bike to school.

表示骑车去学校时，应说 ride my bike to school；ride 后面直接接交通工具，to 表示目的地。原句中的 by 不应放在 ride 和 to 之间。