自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答。先用“Yes”或“No”明确回应，再补充一两句具体信息，例如自行车的颜色、用途，或你小时候骑车的感受。避免照搬问题。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around the park with my friends.

建议: 你表达了肯定观点和环保理由，但语法需要修改：“bikes”是复数，应用“they are”；“is make”应改为“help make”或“make”。此外，问题询问整个国家，不要只谈你的城市；可以补充一个具体原因或例子，并用连接词衔接。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They’re convenient for short trips, and they help reduce traffic and air pollution.

× Yes, in my city is very popular and is make the environment better.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my city, and they make the environment better.

第一部分缺少主语，读者不清楚“很受欢迎”的是什么。可以补上主语“bikes”。此外，后半句也需要明确主语；用“they”指代“bikes”，句子结构会更完整。

× Yes, in my city is very popular and is make the environment better.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my city, and they make the environment better.

“is make”不是正确的动词形式。表达一般事实时，应使用一般现在时：主语“they”（指代复数“bikes”）后接动词原形“make”，不需要加“is”。