自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了开始学骑车的具体年龄作为补充。注意避免重复表达“小时候没有自行车”，并修正“be because”的语法错误。可以用“since”连接原因，让回答更简洁自然。

示例: No, not really. I didn’t learn to ride a bike until I was nearly 12, so I didn’t have one when I was younger.

建议: 开头直接回答了问题，也举出了通勤和上学的例子。将“when we're travel”改为“when we travel”，并用“by bike”表达骑车出行；最后的“They are”重复了前文，可删去。最好补充一个具体原因或场景，使内容更充分。

示例: Yes, definitely. In my city, many people ride bikes to work or school, especially when the weather is nice. They’re also a convenient way to get around when we travel.

× So I didn't have a bike when I was a child be because I didn't know how to ride it then.

✓ So I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride it then.

“because”前多了一个“be”，导致句子结构错误。删除多余的“be”，用“because”直接引出原因从句。

× Even when we're travel, we ride the bike a lot.

✓ Even when we're traveling, we ride bikes a lot.

“we're”是“we are”的缩写，后面应接现在分词，因此“travel”应改为“traveling”。也可以说“Even when we travel”，此时不使用“are”。泛指骑自行车时，通常说“ride bikes”，而不是“ride the bike”。