自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 어린 시절에 자전거가 있었는지 먼저 명확하게 답하세요. 과거 경험이므로 과거형인 “I had”와 “I found”를 사용하고, 자전거 타기가 어려웠던 이유나 연습했던 경험을 한 가지 덧붙이면 좋습니다. 의미를 알기 어려운 단어는 빼고, 문장을 완결하세요.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. At first, I found it difficult to ride, so I practised in a quiet park with my parents. After a few weeks, I could ride it by myself.

建议: 자전거가 인기 있는지에 대해 “Yes, they are”처럼 직접 답한 뒤, 자전거를 타는 사람이 많은 이유를 설명하세요. “most people can ride a bike”는 자전거를 탈 줄 안다는 뜻이므로, 인기를 말하려면 “many people ride bikes”라고 표현하는 것이 더 정확합니다. 이유를 말할 때는 “because” 뒤에 완전한 문장을 쓰고, “affordable”처럼 자전거가 합리적인 가격이라는 점을 구체적으로 설명해 보세요.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. They are also a good way to get some exercise.

× Yes, I have have a ride riding bike when I was child upholstery that was very difficult, but I was hard to practice to ride a bike and.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Riding it was very difficult, but I practiced hard to learn how to ride it.

The question asks about the past, and the phrase when I was a child also establishes a past time. Use had and practiced rather than have and practice. Keep the past tense consistent throughout the response.

× Yes, I have have a ride riding bike when I was child upholstery that was very difficult, but I was hard to practice to ride a bike and.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Riding it was very difficult, but I practiced hard to learn how to ride it.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun bike and before child in the phrase a child. Remember that singular countable nouns generally need an article or another determiner.

× Yes, I have have a ride riding bike when I was child upholstery that was very difficult, but I was hard to practice to ride a bike and.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Riding it was very difficult, but I practiced hard to learn how to ride it.

When practice is followed directly by another verb, the following verb normally takes the -ing form: practice riding. The correction uses learn how to ride to express the idea naturally.

× Yes, I have have a ride riding bike when I was child upholstery that was very difficult, but I was hard to practice to ride a bike and.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Riding it was very difficult, but I practiced hard to learn how to ride it.

The original contains an incomplete, difficult-to-follow structure, including I was hard to practice and a final and with no following clause. Use I practiced hard to describe your effort, and end the response with a complete sentence.

× Yeah, my country, most people can ride bike because of that was very, very. Reasonable.

✓ Yeah, in my country, most people can ride bikes because they are very reasonably priced.

Use in before a country when describing where something is true: in my country. Because of is followed by a noun phrase, not a clause such as that was very reasonable; use because they are instead.

× Yeah, my country, most people can ride bike because of that was very, very. Reasonable.

✓ Yeah, in my country, most people can ride bikes because they are very reasonably priced.

Bike is a singular countable noun, but the sentence refers to bikes in general. Use the plural form bikes after can ride.

× Yeah, my country, most people can ride bike because of that was very, very. Reasonable.

✓ Yeah, in my country, most people can ride bikes because they are very reasonably priced.

Because of that was very, very is not a complete or grammatically connected clause, and Reasonable is an incomplete sentence. Connect the reason with because they are and keep the description in the same complete sentence.

× Yeah, my country, most people can ride bike because of that was very, very. Reasonable.

✓ Yeah, in my country, most people can ride bikes because they are very reasonably priced.

Reasonable describes a noun, but here the intended meaning appears to be that the bikes cost a reasonable amount. Use the adverb reasonably to modify priced: reasonably priced.