自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，注意使用过去时：用“Yes, I did”，而不是“Yes, I have”；描述妈妈买车时说“my mom bought me”。说明学习骑车花了多久时，清楚表达“it took me three weeks to learn”。尽量避免重复和填充词，并用一句具体细节补充，例如自行车的颜色或你在哪里练习。

示例: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a yellow bike when I was a child. It took me about three weeks to learn how to ride it, and I used to practise in a nearby park.

建议: 先清楚回答自行车在本国是否受欢迎；注意用“bikes”表示自行车，用“a popular way to get around”表达“受欢迎的出行方式”，不要说“back”或“transported to”。说明人们为什么骑车，并用正确表达“learn to ride on their own”描述自学骑车。可补充一个具体场景，让回答更自然。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around, and many children learn to ride them when they are young. You can often see people cycling to school or work.

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题使用的是一般过去时“Did you have…?”，回答时应使用助动词“did”，而不是现在完成时中使用的“have”。回答过去时的一般疑问句时，注意保持问句和答句的时态一致。

× Back when I was a child my mom buy umm brought me a yellow bike.

✓ Back when I was a child, my mom brought me a yellow bike.

句子讲述的是童年时发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。“bring”的过去式是“brought”；“buy”是现在时，不能用于这里。表达时应删去口误和重复内容，并保持动词时态一致。

× At first I learned the bike umm take my uh, three years, uh, three weeks umm, then I learn it very well.

✓ At first, it took me three weeks to learn to ride the bike, and then I learned to ride it very well.

这句话描述的是过去学骑车的经历，因此应使用过去式：“take”改为“took”，“learn”改为“learned”。表达所花时间时可用“It took me three weeks to…”。另外，表示学会骑车应说“learn to ride a bike”，而不是“learn the bike”。

× Yes I think back is very popular and transported to in our country and everyone learn this bike at their self skills.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular and are widely used in our country, and everyone learns to ride a bike by themselves.

结合问题“bikes are popular”，这里谈论的是自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。注意名词单复数要与上下文表达的对象一致。

× Yes I think back is very popular and transported to in our country and everyone learn this bike at their self skills.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular and are widely used in our country, and everyone learns to ride a bike by themselves.

主语“bikes”是复数，因此谓语应为“are”，不能用“is”。主语“everyone”在语法上视为第三人称单数，谓语应使用“learns”。检查句子时，注意谓语动词要与主语的人称和数保持一致。

× Yes I think back is very popular and transported to in our country and everyone learn this bike at their self skills.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular and are widely used in our country, and everyone learns to ride a bike by themselves.

原句中的“transported”前缺少构成被动语态所需的助动词，且“transported to in our country”搭配不正确。这里可表达为“are widely used in our country”（在我们国家被广泛使用）。被动语态通常使用“be动词 + 过去分词”。

× Yes I think back is very popular and transported to in our country and everyone learn this bike at their self skills.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular and are widely used in our country, and everyone learns to ride a bike by themselves.

“their self skills”不是正确的反身代词表达。若想表达“靠自己”，可以说“by themselves”。反身代词应使用完整形式，如“myself”“yourself”或“themselves”，不能将“their”和“self”这样组合。