自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，但时态需要与过去的经历保持一致：把“I go”改为“I went”，并用“felt”描述当时的感受。可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车上学时的感受或原因。注意“feel very free”可以改为更自然的“feel a sense of freedom”。

示例: Yes, I did. I rode my bike to school when I was a child, and I always felt a great sense of freedom on the way.

建议: 先明确回答普通自行车是否流行，再说明电动自行车的情况，避免“I think no”造成表达含糊。用“electric bikes”代替“the electronic bike”，并把“many people both ride that”改为“many people ride them”。可补充一个具体原因或使用场景，让回答更完整。

示例: Traditional bikes aren't as popular as they used to be in China. However, electric bikes are very common because they're convenient for short trips, especially in busy cities.

× When I was a student, I go to school by bike, and when I ride a bike I will feel very free.

✓ When I was a student, I went to school by bike, and when I rode a bike, I felt very free.

句子描述的是过去学生时期的经历，因此动词应使用过去时：go 应改为 went，ride 应改为 rode，will feel 应改为 felt。讲述过去的习惯或感受时，注意让相关动词保持过去时态一致。

× I think no, but the electronic bike is very popular in China, so many people both ride that.

✓ I don't think so, but electric bikes are very popular in China, so many people ride them too.

这里泛指中国常见的电动自行车，应使用复数形式 electric bikes，并搭配 are。泛指一类事物时，通常可以用复数名词，不需要加 the。

× I think no, but the electronic bike is very popular in China, so many people both ride that.

✓ I don't think so, but electric bikes are very popular in China, so many people ride them too.

前文的 electric bikes 是复数，因此后面应使用复数代词 them 指代，不能用指代单数事物的 that。代词的单复数要与它所指代的名词保持一致。