自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer mainly in the past tense because the question is about your childhood: say “I had” rather than “I have.” Correct “when I was child” to “when I was a child,” and describe it as “pink” rather than “a pink in color.” Use “it” for a single bike, not “them.” Make the final detail consistent with the past, and connect the birthday detail naturally. Avoid repeating “very special” without explaining why.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was pink, and my father gave it to me for my tenth birthday, so it was very special to me. I used to ride it with my cousins and siblings almost every day.

建议: Your answer is relevant and gives clear reasons, but avoid repeating that bikes are popular in both the opening and closing. Use “most people” (not “most of people”) and “bikes” to match the plural subject. Correct “it’s also save” to “they also save.” Be specific about whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, since “bike” can refer to either, and use linking words to present your reasons smoothly.

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in India, especially in smaller towns. They’re affordable and easy to park, and they can save people time on short journeys. Motorbikes are also widely used, particularly by commuters.

× I have a bike.

✓ I had a bike.

The question asks whether you had a bike when you were a child, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had rather than have to match the time being discussed.

× When I was child it was a pink in color and I vividly remember it was given by my father on my 10th birthday.

✓ When I was a child, it was pink in color, and I vividly remember it was given by my father on my 10th birthday.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a. Pink is an adjective describing the bike, so it should not be preceded by a in this construction. Before singular countable nouns, use an article; do not use a before an adjective when the adjective is not followed by a noun.

× So this is very special for me and I enjoy riding them every day with my cousins and my siblings.

✓ So this is very special for me, and I enjoy riding it every day with my cousins and my siblings.

The pronoun them is plural, but it refers to one bike. Use the singular pronoun it to agree with that reference.

× Most of people use bike because it is very affordable and convenient and easy to park and it's also save a lot of time.

✓ Most people use bikes because they are very affordable, convenient, and easy to park, and each bike also saves a lot of time.

Most people is the correct general expression; most of must be followed by a determiner, as in most of the people. For a general statement, omit of and say most people.

× Most of people use bike because it is very affordable and convenient and easy to park and it's also save a lot of time.

✓ Most people use bikes because they are very affordable, convenient, and easy to park, and each bike also saves a lot of time.

Bike is a singular countable noun, but it is used here without an article. Since the sentence describes bikes in general, use the plural form bikes. Use plural nouns when speaking generally about countable items.

× Most of people use bike because it is very affordable and convenient and easy to park and it's also save a lot of time.

✓ Most people use bikes because they are very affordable, convenient, and easy to park, and each bike also saves a lot of time.

In the correction, each bike is a singular subject, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular ending -s: saves. In the original, save does not agree with the singular subject it.