自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充购买时间和用途。注意讲过去经历时使用过去时；“can riding”应改为“could ride”，“writing”应为“riding”。避免把多个意思用逗号连成一个长句，可用“and”或“because”连接，并说明你为什么喜欢骑车。

示例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was six, and I often rode it to school. I also enjoyed riding along the riverbank because it was a fun way to spend my free time.

建议: 开头直接表明自行车在你们国家是否流行。注意“bikes”而不是“bugs”；固定搭配是“play an important role”，不是“make a role”。描述日常现象时可用“see people riding”，并补充骑车方便的具体原因，例如节省时间或便于短途出行。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially in smaller towns. I often see people riding them to work or to nearby shops. They’re convenient for short trips and make it easier to get around when traffic is busy.

× Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I can riding to school or writing along the bank it's a really interesting thing

✓ Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I could ride to school or write along the bank. It was a really interesting thing.

句子描述的是过去的经历，因此这里应使用过去式情态动词 could，而不是 can。情态动词后接动词原形，所以应说 could ride，不能说 can riding。

× Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I can riding to school or writing along the bank it's a really interesting thing

✓ Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I could ride to school or write along the bank. It was a really interesting thing.

这段话讲的是六岁时发生的事情。描述当时的感受时，用过去式 It was 与上下文的过去时间保持一致。

× I live in a small town in China, and I can see many people ride bikes from home to work or other shops is convenient.

✓ I live in a small town in China, and I can see many people riding bikes from home to work or to other shops, which is convenient.

原句把“I can see many people ride bikes...”和“...is convenient”直接拼接在一起，导致句子结构不完整、连接不当。可用 which 引导定语从句补充说明骑车出行很方便。