自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then describe what you did with the bike and why you liked it. Use the past tense consistently (for example, “bought” and “rode”), and say “kept me healthy” rather than “help me healthy.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom bought it for me, and I often rode it to the park with my friends. I loved it because cycling was fun and helped me stay active.

建议: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example. Use the present perfect with “in recent years” to describe a growing trend, and avoid repeating words.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Cycling has become more popular in recent years, partly because it is an affordable way to exercise and get around. You can see many people riding bikes in parks and around cities.

× when I starting my mom buys a bike for me I usually buy a bike to the park with my friend

✓ When I was a child, my mom bought me a bike. I usually rode it to the park with my friend.

The question asks about your childhood, so use past-tense forms for these past events. Use was rather than starting, bought rather than buys, and rode rather than buy.

× I have a very like it

✓ I really liked it

Very usually modifies an adjective or another adverb, not the verb liked. Use really to modify liked. Also, liked fits the past-time context.

× because it can help me healthy

✓ because it helped me stay healthy

The verb help is followed by an object and a base-form verb: help me stay. Healthy is an adjective and cannot directly follow me in this structure. Use helped to keep the explanation in the past tense.

× the bike sport sport more popular in China in a few day few years

✓ Bike sports have become more popular in China in the past few years.

The original phrase has no finite verb connecting the subject to the idea of becoming more popular. Add have become to form a complete clause. The phrase in the past few years expresses a trend continuing up to the present.

× the bike sport sport more popular in China in a few day few years

✓ Bike sports have become more popular in China in the past few years.

Use the plural sports if referring to bike sports generally, and years because the phrase refers to multiple years. The natural expression for a recent trend is in the past few years.