自行车— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, and when a friend offered me to teach me how to ride, I refuse because I was uh umm umm, afraid of falling and I also was afraid of embarrassing myself. As a result, I still can't ride a bike, which is a source.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
No, Nowadays I cannot say that bikes are, uh, popular in Georgia because we don't have necessary infrastructure for it. The roads are not safe for, uh, bike users in the you can stumble and fall a lot. So I would say no.
评估
总分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 55.0建议: Answer directly, then explain your decision and its result. Correct the phrasing to “offered to teach me” and use the past tense “refused.” Avoid repeated fillers and finish your final thought; “which is a source” is incomplete. You can combine the two fears more naturally and keep the answer concise.
示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. A friend once offered to teach me, but I refused because I was afraid of falling and embarrassing myself. As a result, I still can’t ride a bike, which I sometimes regret.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 62.0建议: State your opinion clearly and support it with a specific reason. Use “the necessary infrastructure” or “enough cycling infrastructure,” and avoid the broken phrase “in the you can stumble and fall a lot.” Explain briefly what makes the roads unsafe, and reduce fillers and repetition.
示例: No, I wouldn’t say bikes are very popular in Georgia. There isn’t enough cycling infrastructure, and many roads don’t have safe bike lanes. As a result, cyclists may feel unsafe riding alongside cars.
语法
× When a friend offered me to teach me how to ride, I refuse because I was afraid of falling.
✓ When a friend offered to teach me how to ride, I refused because I was afraid of falling.
The speaker is describing a past event, so refuse should be in the past tense: refused. Also, offered me to teach is not the correct verb pattern here; use offered to teach me. Keep the verb tense consistent when recounting past events.
× The roads are not safe for bike users in the you can stumble and fall a lot.
✓ The roads are not safe for bike users because you can stumble and fall a lot.
The phrase in the does not connect grammatically to the following clause. Use because to show the reason that the roads are unsafe, and form a complete clause after it.
× We don't have necessary infrastructure for it.
✓ We don't have the necessary infrastructure for it.
The speaker refers to the specific infrastructure needed for cycling in the country, so the definite article the is appropriate before necessary infrastructure.
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