自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你直接回答了问题，也提供了童年骑车的经历，但回答末尾没有说完，且“I I”有重复；“I had been to every corner”在这里不够自然。建议把内容分成较短的句子，用过去时描述经历，并补全结尾，例如说明骑车探索家乡的感受。

示例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike, and I used to ride it with my friends during the summer holidays. We often explored different parts of my hometown, which was a lot of fun.

建议: 回答切题，并给出了自行车不够普及的原因，逻辑清楚。可以将“Not as much as they could be”改得更自然、更明确，例如说自行车“没有本来可以那么受欢迎”；还可以补充一个具体影响，如骑行道路不足会让人觉得不安全。

示例: I think bikes could be more popular in my country. Many people enjoy cycling, but there aren’t enough dedicated bike lanes, so riding in busy traffic can feel unsafe.

× So I I had been to every corner of my hometown on the

✓ So I went to every corner of my hometown.

这里是在讲童年时骑车去过家乡各处的经历，用一般过去时 went 更合适。过去完成时 had been 通常需要表示某件事发生在另一个过去时间之前；此处没有这样的时间参照。另外，“I I”属于口语重复，“on the”则是未完成的片段，因此在改正后的句子中省略。