自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用过去时说明原因和相关经历。注意这里应使用“bike”，不是“bag”；“想让我学骑车”可说“wanted me to learn how to ride a bike”，“教我骑车”可说“taught me how to ride it”。避免重复“ride”和“they bought”，并将答案控制在两句左右。

示例: Yes, I did. My grandparents wanted me to learn how to ride, so they bought me a bike and taught me how to use it.

建议: 先清楚回答自行车是否受欢迎，再解释它受欢迎的原因。注意主谓一致：“people like”；泛指骑自行车时说“riding bikes”。“it’s in practical skills”表达不自然，可改为“they’re a practical way to get around”。用一个具体例子补充说明，并避免重复或未完成的句子。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. People like riding them for exercise, and they’re also a convenient way to get around. For example, many university students cycle to classes because it’s cheap and practical.

× because my grandparents want me to learn how to ride a bike

✓ because my grandparents wanted me to learn how to ride a bike

这段经历发生在过去（when I was a child），所以动词 want 应使用过去式 wanted。叙述过去发生的事情时，要注意保持动词时态一致。

× So they bought, they bought me one in the teach me how to write it.

✓ So they bought me one to teach me how to ride it.

表示“买一辆自行车来教我骑”时，应使用不定式 to teach 表示目的；in the teach me 的结构不正确。结合上下文，骑自行车应说 ride it，而不是 write it。

× I think people likes riding bike

✓ I think people like riding a bike

people 表示复数，谓语动词应使用原形 like，不能加 -s。另外，bike 是可数名词单数，通常需要冠词；此处改为 a bike。

× riding bike

✓ riding a bike

bike 是可数名词单数，前面需要加冠词。这里可以说 riding a bike。

× because not only for exercise but also it's in practical skills

✓ because riding bikes is not only good exercise but also a practical skill

not only...but also... 连接的内容应保持结构平行。原句连接了 for exercise 和 it's in practical skills，结构不一致；可改为连接两个名词性成分 good exercise 和 a practical skill。

× Like some university students.

✓ For example, some university students can't ride a bike.

原句只有 Like some university students 这个短语，没有谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。可以补上完整的主谓结构来表达例子。