自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明父母不让你骑的原因和他们如何接送你。注意使用过去时（例如 *thought*、*took*），并改正表达：*they all want go* 应为 *they didn't want me to ride one*；*took by card* 应为 *drove me by car*。避免重复使用 *anywhere/everywhere*，控制在两三句内。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous for me to ride one. Instead, they usually drove me wherever I needed to go.

建议: 开头直接回答后，用一个具体场景解释自行车为什么受欢迎。减少 *uh*、*mmm* 等填充词；*take bikes to everywhere* 不自然，可改为 *ride bikes to nearby places*；距离可说 *short distances*，不要说 *short kilometers*。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. They often ride them to nearby places, such as school or a friend’s house, because these trips are usually quite short.

× my parents think that it is so dangerous for me

✓ my parents thought that it was so dangerous for me

这段话描述的是童年时的情况，主句和从句都应使用过去时。因此，think 应改为 thought，is 应改为 was。

× they all want go

✓ they all wanted to go

want 后接另一个动词时，通常使用 want to do 的结构，因此 go 前需要加 to。结合过去的语境，want 也应改为 wanted。如果你想表达“他们不想让我骑车”，可以说 they didn’t want me to ride a bike。

× When I went anywhere everywhere my parents took by card for me.

✓ Whenever I went somewhere, my parents took me by car.

anywhere 和 everywhere 在这里重复且意思冲突。表示“每当我去某个地方”时，可以用 Whenever I went somewhere。另外，take 后面需要说明带走或接送的对象；这里应加宾格代词 me。by car 表示“乘汽车”。

× my parents took by card for me

✓ my parents took me by car

这里 take 表示“载某人”，需要在动词后使用宾格代词 me。for me 不能代替这个宾语。by car 是“乘汽车”的正确表达；card 表示“卡片”，不能用于此处。

× a lot of children take bikes to everywhere

✓ a lot of children take bikes everywhere

everywhere 本身可以直接表示“到处”，前面不需要加介词 to。因此应去掉 to。