自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提到了是谁买的，但要注意回忆童年时使用过去时：将“when I'm child”改为“when I was a child”，将“ I like it”改为“ I liked it”。“I like it”指代不够具体，可以补充一个具体细节，例如你常骑车去哪里，或为什么喜欢这辆车。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought me a blue one, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood after school.

建议: 先直接回答观点，再用一两个相关理由或例子展开即可。注意主谓一致：“China has”；表达过去时应为“China used to be”，而描述日常习惯可说“when they go out”。“中国过去比较贫穷”与当下骑车受欢迎的联系不够清晰，也不宜将其说成唯一原因；可以改为提及共享单车、短途通勤或环保，并删去重复总结。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable. They’re also a practical way to get around in busy areas.

× Yes, I had a bike when I'm child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题类型：过去时错误（ID 5）。句子讲的是童年时期的事情，应用过去时。这里应把“I’m”改为“I was”；“child”前还需要冠词“a”。

× You know, China have a large population and China used to be very poor.

✓ You know, China has a large population and China used to be very poor.

问题类型：第三人称单数错误（ID 2）。主语“China”是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的动词“have”应改为“has”。后半句“China used to be very poor”语法正确，无需修改。

× People usually choose to ride a bicycle when they going out.

✓ People usually choose to ride a bicycle when they go out.

问题类型：现在时错误（ID 6）。“usually”表示经常发生的习惯，应用一般现在时。“they going out”缺少助动词，且不符合这里表达习惯性动作的语境；应改为“they go out”。