自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中把“bike”说成了“bag”，导致关键信息不清楚；“when I was child”和“my mother's send have sent to me”也有明显语法错误。先直接回答是否有自行车，再用一两句说明是谁送的、你通常骑车做什么。注意说“when I was a child”“my mother gave it to me”和“I rode it”。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me as a gift, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建议: 观点清楚，但重复了“Yes, I do”和“go to school”，影响流畅度。注意主谓一致：说“nearly everyone has”和“everyone needs”；“方便我们去……”应说“convenient for us to go”。可以补充一个具体原因，例如自行车省钱、适合短途出行，避免绝对地说“everyone”。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re convenient and inexpensive. They’re also useful for short trips.

× Yes I had a bag when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child.

表示“我是一个孩子时”应说“when I was a child”。可数名词 child 前需要加不定冠词 a。

× It's from my mother's send have sent to me.

✓ It was sent to me by my mother.

这里描述的是童年时发生的事情，应使用过去时。原句中的“have sent”是现在完成时，且句子结构不完整。可以说“It was sent to me by my mother”，用一般过去时被动结构说明它是母亲寄给我的。

× I always biking to hometown.

✓ I always rode my bike to my hometown.

“biking”不能在这里单独充当句子的谓语。讲述过去经常做的事情时，可用动词过去式“rode”。另外，“hometown”前加“my”表达“我的家乡”。

× I think nearly everyone have a bike.

✓ I think nearly everyone has a bike.

“everyone”语法上视为单数，因此一般现在时中应使用第三人称单数形式“has”，不能用“have”。

× It's convenient for us go work or go school, go to school.

✓ It's convenient for us to go to work or school.

“It is convenient for someone to do something”是常见结构，因此“us”后需要加不定式标记“to”。此外，“go to work”和“go to school”中的“to”不能省略。

× So I think everyone need a bike.

✓ So I think everyone needs a bike.

“everyone”是单数主语，所以一般现在时的谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“needs”。