自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了母亲教你骑车的细节。不过，“sent me a bicycle”不太自然，如果是母亲买给你或送给你，可以说“bought me a bike”或“gave me a bike”；“rode a bike”重复出现，可以精简。由于描述的是过去的经历，最后应使用过去时“could learn”，而不是“can learn”。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum bought it for me, and she taught me how to ride it. I soon learned, and I used to ride it every day.

建议: 回答有明确观点，也尝试用街上的场景举例，但存在较多语法和搭配问题：“bikes is”应改为“bikes are”；“many person ride”应改为“many people riding”或“many people ride”。表达日常活动时可说“go to work”“go home”和“have fun”，并用“for example”连接具体细节。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, you can often see people cycling to work or riding around their neighbourhood for fun.

× Yes, when I was a child, my mom sent me a bicycle and I rode a bike every day and my mom taught me and helped me so that I can quickly learn how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my mom sent me a bicycle, and I rode a bike every day. My mom taught me and helped me so that I could quickly learn how to ride a bike.

过去时错误：句子描述的是小时候发生的事情，前面用了过去时“taught”和“helped”，因此这里表示当时能够学会，应将“can”改为过去式“could”。

× Yes, I think bikes is popular in my country and when you walk along the street you can see many person ride a bike to go to the job or return to the home or have a fun.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, and when you walk along the street, you can see many people ride bikes to go to work, return home, or have fun.

主谓一致错误（主谓一致错误）：主语“bikes”是复数，谓语动词应使用“are”，不能用单数形式“is”。看到复数主语时，要确认谓语动词也与其保持一致。

× Yes, I think bikes is popular in my country and when you walk along the street you can see many person ride a bike to go to the job or return to the home or have a fun.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, and when you walk along the street, you can see many people ride bikes to go to work, return home, or have fun.

单复数错误：“many”后面应接可数名词复数，因此“person”应改为“people”。“Person”的复数形式通常是“people”。

× Yes, I think bikes is popular in my country and when you walk along the street you can see many person ride a bike to go to the job or return to the home or have a fun.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, and when you walk along the street, you can see many people ride bikes to go to work, return home, or have fun.

定冠词使用错误：这里泛指去工作和回自己家，不需要在“work”或“home”前使用定冠词“the”。常见表达是“go to work”和“return home”。

× Yes, I think bikes is popular in my country and when you walk along the street you can see many person ride a bike to go to the job or return to the home or have a fun.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, and when you walk along the street, you can see many people ride bikes to go to work, return home, or have fun.

冠词错误：“fun”在“have fun”这一表达中作不可数名词使用，前面不加不定冠词“a”。应说“have fun”，而不是“have a fun”。