自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then explain the reason in one or two clear sentences. The phrase “the recent is that” is unclear, and “didn't bought” should be “didn't buy.” Avoid repeating that you could not ride a bike, and use linking words such as “because” to connect your ideas.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My dad tried to teach me using my older sister’s bike, but it was too big for me. Since I never learned to ride, he didn’t buy me one.

建议: State your opinion clearly at the beginning, then support it with a specific observation. Use “along the roads” rather than “beside the roads,” and say “professional bikers” or “professional cyclists,” not “a professional bikers.” Reduce fillers and avoid repeating your conclusion.

示例: Yes, I think cycling is fairly popular in my country. You can often see groups of cyclists riding along the roads, especially at weekends. Many of them wear professional-looking gear, so cycling seems to be a popular hobby.

× So he didn't bought me any.

✓ So he didn't buy me any.

After did not (didn't), use the base form of the verb, buy, not its past-tense form, bought. Remember: did not + base verb.

× I suppose because there are lots of bike riders beside the roads when you are driving your car, they seem like a professional bikers.

✓ I suppose so, because there are lots of bike riders beside the roads when you are driving your car. They seem like professional bikers.

I suppose because does not form a complete, clear sentence in this context. Use I suppose so to refer back to the idea that bikes are popular, then give the reason in a separate clause. A period also prevents the two complete thoughts from running together.

× They seem like a professional bikers.

✓ They seem like professional bikers.

Do not use the singular article a before the plural noun bikers. Omit a when describing bikers in general.