自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你直接回答了“有”，但后半句不完整，表达“in my 12”不自然，也没有说明自行车的情况。请补全年龄或时间，并增加一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途，或你是否喜欢骑它。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about 12. It was blue, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: 你给出了明确观点和理由，但“ride bike”应为“ride bikes”，“ride back to go to school”表达不自然，而且前后意思重复。可以用一般现在时描述常见情况，并补充一个具体原因或场景，让回答更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride bikes to school because it’s affordable and convenient, especially for those who live nearby.

× Yes, I had a bike in my. 12.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 12.

“in my”后面需要接名词，但这里没有完整表达；描述年龄时，可以用“when I was 12”（当我12岁时）。建议使用完整的时间从句来表达年龄。

× Most of the students will ride bike to go to school, so I often ride back to go to school.

✓ Most of the students will ride bikes to go to school, so I often ride back to go to school.

“bike”是可数名词，单数形式前通常需要冠词；这里泛指学生骑自行车上学，用复数“bikes”更合适。建议表达一般情况时使用复数名词，如“ride bikes”。