自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答没有清楚说明小时候是否有自行车；“milk tool”表达不准确，“go school”应为“go to school”。请先直接回答问题，再说明自行车的用途。避免重复“my”和填充词，并把句子完整说完。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to school, and I also cycled around my neighbourhood for fun. It was a convenient way to get around and get some exercise.

建议: 开头回答直接，但“stay up for work”不符合语境，可改为“use bikes to commute to work”；“massive applications of biking”也不自然，可说“bikes are used for many purposes”。建议补充一个具体场景，并注意主谓一致和表达简洁。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or run errands, especially in busy city centres. Cycling is also a convenient and affordable way to exercise.

× Here I have one, uh, it was used as a milk tool to go school at that time.

✓ Here I have one, uh, it was used as a milk tool to go to school at that time.

表示“去学校”时，go 后面需要使用介词 to，因此应说“go to school”。

× And besides the I usually bicycled around my around my home to relax with myself and it also acted as a a.

✓ Besides that, I usually bicycled around my home to relax by myself.

“Besides the”后面缺少名词，句子结构不完整；此处可改为“Besides that”（除此之外）。句末的“it also acted as a a”没有表达完整意思，是未完成的句子片段，因此不宜保留。

× And besides the I usually bicycled around my around my home to relax with myself and it also acted as a a.

✓ Besides that, I usually bicycled around my home to relax by myself.

表达“独自放松”时，通常说“relax by myself”，而不是“relax with myself”。“by myself”表示独自一人。