自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，注意使用过去时：用“had”而不是“have”。语法上，“every child”后面要接单数动词；“my mom's very love me”应改为“my mom loved me very much”。避免笼统地说“每个孩子都有自行车”，可以改成自己的具体经历，并补充一个简短原因或用途。

示例: Yes, I did. My mum bought me a bike when I was about seven because she wanted me to be able to ride to school. I used it almost every day.

建议: 回答时用复数主语“bikes”，因此应说“bikes are”。“My country is in China”和“In our country in China”重复且表达不自然，直接说“In China”即可。避免断言每个孩子都需要自行车；可以描述自行车在当地的普及情况，并用具体例子或原因展开。

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in China, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they’re affordable and convenient. You can often see people riding bikes to school, work, or nearby shops.

× I have a bike when I was a child because every child in our country have its own bike and my mom's very love me and she thinks I should also have one.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child because every child in our country has their own bike, and my mom loved me very much and thinks I should also have one.

“When I was a child”明确表示过去，因此表示“有”的动词应使用过去式“had”，不能用“have”。描述童年时的情况，动词应与过去时间保持一致。

× I have a bike when I was a child because every child in our country have its own bike and my mom's very love me and she thinks I should also have one.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child because every child in our country has their own bike, and my mom loved me very much and thinks I should also have one.

“every child”是单数主语，描述一般情况时，谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式“has”，不能用“have”。

× I have a bike when I was a child because every child in our country have its own bike and my mom's very love me and she thinks I should also have one.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child because every child in our country has their own bike, and my mom loved me very much and thinks I should also have one.

“its”通常用于指代物品或动物；这里指的是人“child”，用“their”更合适。可使用单数形式的“they/their”来指代性别不确定的人。

× I have a bike when I was a child because every child in our country have its own bike and my mom's very love me and she thinks I should also have one.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child because every child in our country has their own bike, and my mom loved me very much and thinks I should also have one.

“my mom”在这里描述过去对你的关爱，因此动词“love”应改为过去式“loved”。讲述过去发生的事情时，要注意把相关动词也改为过去式。

× I have a bike when I was a child because every child in our country have its own bike and my mom's very love me and she thinks I should also have one.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child because every child in our country has their own bike, and my mom loved me very much and thinks I should also have one.

“very”不能直接修饰动词“love”。可以说“loved me very much”，也可以说“really loved me”。注意区分“very much”和“really”的用法。

× Yes, I think bikes is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

主语“bikes”是复数，因此系动词应使用复数形式“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。

× In our country in China, every child has a bike because every child need a bike to go to school or go to work.

✓ In our country in China, every child has a bike because every child needs a bike to go to school or go to work.

“every child”是单数主语，因此一般现在时的动词要使用第三人称单数形式“needs”，不能用“need”。